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Morning Walk by =shidabeeda:iconshidabeeda:

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©2009 =shidabeeda
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So i took my daily morning activties and drew them with a random character: talk to Tommy, shower, kiss my bird, drink my *liquid poison, text my friend something silly, and so on.. I could explain it all but that take forever LOL.

hope you all enjoy~

*liquid poison - Is what i call soda ^///^ i know its not good to drink in the morning

Tool(s):
muliti-liner pens and color pencils :heart:

Critiques


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=gwenaudge93 Aug 3, 2009, 4:04:10 PM
I think this picture turned out very well, just like many of the others that I see done by you. But I think it was very creative how you decided to take all of what you did in one day and turn it into a very fun and colourful piece of art. Normally, for me, I feel it's very hard to create collages because it has to be so all over the place but also it needs to blend well and work together nicely, and end up having a good meaning. Like for your drawing for example it did have a theme and meaning: what you did today. I also think it was a very creative way to describe what went on in your life that day, instead of just normally writing it in your journal.
I very much like the colours you chose for your character's hair also and like the colours you chose to use for the dark and lighter spots. Everything blends and flows well. Nice and smooth and no rough spots, makes her hair look very soft.
Also I think her facial expression goes along very well with the whole piece. Her eyes look very bright, happy and thoughtful, and also maybe a little bit of a trouble maker look too (to me), lol. The way she's moving too makes her look very bright and peppy.
I also think that this picture is so fun and alive that it can inspire me -or someone else- to pick up a pencil (or paint brush like I will be doing in a few minutes) and just get to work on a new piece!
What else is nice about this picture is that it has a good balance and layout. All the commotion and other things are all behind her and not in front of her. And there is just enough to make it look complete and not overdone. Because I think if the whole back ground was filled with things then it would take your eyes away from the character and wouldn't make her stand out as much.
But in the end I would say this piece is PERFECT! :D


P.S. And I must say I love the cats! :heart:
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=Tagzii Jul 18, 2009, 10:09:51 PM
Cute uniform! The concept is great!

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~yamifan101 Jul 18, 2009, 10:15:11 PM
Of course I enjoy it, it's BEAU-TI-FUL!

PS: I have shoes ALMOST exactly alike O.O I have knee-high "high" tops XD 20 Eyelets ;D I love them... but my dad broke the zipper, but he is buying the next pair >;]

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"Everyone was born an Artist, it just takes one to pull he/she out of you, to fight back from all that bad critezism over the years. That one... Is you." -Darcy Perdue,

J Brothers=Queernas brothers
S Gomez=Selena Whore-mez
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Mood: Sentimental ~aeon9kid Jul 18, 2009, 10:21:47 PM
aww shes so cute and pretty i love it





GOOD JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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i eat humans :0 pucca rocks!!!!!
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Mood: Teasing ~SweetLike Jul 18, 2009, 10:47:49 PM
Silly texts about fat muscle head gorillas! :evillaugh:

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I'm not little~ I'm FunSize ^~^ Aly is bananas*
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~Shiroi-Dracula Jul 18, 2009, 11:35:43 PM
Omigosh soda is bad anytime of the day xDD Cute! I didn't know you had a bird ;_;

Oh man I still have a lot of art you gave to me(including my whole 'family' XD)
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=shidabeeda Jul 18, 2009, 11:37:36 PM
lol I knowz :p but fruit juice cant wake me up XDD good times good times

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Mood: Joy ~Marsy-88 Jul 19, 2009, 1:07:56 AM
wow! she looks cute ^^

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:bulletwhite: I am just looking at you :eyes: everything else, this is your interpretation :paranoid: :bulletwhite:
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~wanderingSoul17 Jul 19, 2009, 5:56:43 AM
i like how your art spreads into the negative space in this one! this one is pretty on a level beyond your character design, and i think you should offer this as a print because it's artistic quality!

way to go!
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~Scarlet-Leaf69 Jul 19, 2009, 9:50:17 AM
wow awesome i like the lil kittens near her feet they look so cute :iconblushplz:

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“I’m sorry I…I just never meant for you to get hurt…well maybe a bit hurt like me attacking you with a tree branch, but not like near death hurt!” -Anu
"I'm so evil also into cats!!!!" XD
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